This was my start above. The boards on our right side of the barn are too light and make that part of the come forward and give a concave look to the front. Also the lines of the boards run up on the right and make the barn lean to the left even though the perpendicular lines are pretty good at this point.

You can see in this version some of the corrections I made. The eave on our right has to come down as well, but it cannot be the same level as the trees or that will bring the trees forward and create a tension there.
I did not take a photo of my work on it today, baseball was calling. I'm also going to do the flowers a bit differently, or maybe revise it completely. Who knows? You will find out here, soon.
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